- 分享到:
从句数量偏少；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
In the picture, we can see that many people cross the road when the traffic light is red. It is called crossing road in a Chinese way. I don't think it is right because it is dangerous for us to do so. As a student, we can do a lot to keep safe on the road. First of all, we should obey the traffic rules. Secondly, we will never listen to MP4 when riding a bike. Thirdly, we mustn't ride too fast on the road. What's more, we should always ride on the right side of the road. In short, let's say goodbye to crossing the road in a Chinese way and live a safer and happier life.
