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可增加从句的使用量，注意个别的句子错误；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
In the picture, today.i am very happy,because i visit my grandmother and grandfather at five o'clock pm .and eat more delicious food at there,the grandmother and grandfather say;i hope you could study hard,happy everyday,finally,i hope you will successful in the future, In short, let's say goodbye to crossing the road in a Chinese way and live a safer and happier life.
