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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；文章高级词汇较多样，不过请注意单词拼写的检查。
Advertisement never fails to be a controversial issue ever since the advent of mass media, resccently some people argue that whether it is avaiable to provide AD for young children which include snacks or toys have rised an debate, some people said Advertisemts contine lots of information that paly a role to help child recognize the word, while others believe that children are to samll they could not identify which is useful and they advised to regulate massive advertisement on social media. undeniable, to some extend , people can be informed by advertisement with variety of informations, with that we can acknowledge also compare with other good , therefor, to help us making right decision. on the other hand mass media provide a platform for those manufactures, using advertisement to introduce potential customers. according a study, sales volume associated with the amount of adverstiments. I have to say adverstimets really is an important mean to encrease sale. Conversely, the public were distusted with advertisement because sometimes it really spoil the fun of wating TV. especially these days, there are largement amount of advertisement on the media, those includes food education ,healthy products, such large amount of information sometimes make people overwhelmed, It's hard for adult to identify useful or junk information form it, let alone children that they are immuate and often likely to be misleading by those informations. one of my friends he spoiled his kids, he bought everything his sun asked for which were informed on TV, even if he through away most of the foods, I thought it's a kind of waste, and that's can explain the bad effect of TV advertisement. All in all, it's not practical to ban all the advertisement on the TV set ,but I think it could be possible for anthorities to regulate or cut some part of the trash informations, reducing the usless and also avoid to misleding children.
