文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;文中从句数量过少;全文结构较为严谨。
Online shipping more and more fashionable. more and more person acceptable it. There are several advantages for online shopping.Firstly,it is very convenient. Use a computer and let's you save many times.Secondly,it be saving more money for you. But it also disadvantages,if you order your goods ,but you don't satisfied return is a matter thing.Online shopping quality is very difficult,so,sometimes will waste more times. So, as a result online shopping is fashion but we should use appropriate
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