2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

复杂句使用不错，句法规范；作者要注意增加使用高级词汇，单词拼写做的挺好；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

My hometown is Wuhan, in Hubei province, a very beautiful place suiting to live in and work at, and which owns a lot of interesting place to be visited. Every year, A lot of people from around all over country and all over te world arrive at here and visit. If she come here, I'll take her to see the places below. At first, The Huanghe Tower is the place we must reach to, which is one of the four famous towers in China. It maybe have nearly 200 years' history. You don't think to have gone to Wuhan if you don't reach to Huanghe Tower. The second, The Wuhan Changjiang Bridge is kowned by all over the world. It is very splendid. What's more, it has many functions, for example passing by trains, by car, and passengers. The third, The Wuhan university is a place we must visit to. There are countless people from all of the country abstracted to see the Ying flowers. I think she will be pleasant to visit here.