语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
Some people in our life like to get a conclusion immediately when they see or hear something.Because things can some times be very complicated in real life.To some extent ,i suppose getting a conclusion at once as soon as you counter something is not intelligent and some times may cause big joke or may be fooled by yourself. We are all ordinary, common ,and we are not predictors.First,that may leave a bad impression on others.Everyone ,for sure,doesn't tend to be fond of oragant people in reason that it can not be considered as modest and somewhat selfish or aggressive,or just not friendly,or maybe it can lead to damages. Therefore ,i insist we all had better think again when we decide thing to be some kind of situation other than we get a conclusion at first sight of seeing it.I think only in this way can we make it right and have a good attitude towards our lifes ,be rational and have a critical thinking habit.After all ,the real whiz is very rare.Otherwise we may lose a lot of opportunities in our society.
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