小学三年级英语作文:My father's day

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中衔接词丰富。

My father is a worker and he is work in supermarket. His shift has morning time and evening time. If his shift is morning time then he gets up very early,After his breakfast ,He goes to work and his work time eight hours every day.He almost five o'clock in the afternoon goes home.Return to home he is cooking dinner for us.He cooks food very delicious.My sister and I like all these foods.However,he works very hard,but he never complained.So,he is a good father and we love him.