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In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated in the bar chart above,we can observe distinctly that some remarkable changes have been taken place in terms of the ownership of houses in China in the past decade.The percentage of the state-owned houses has diminished sharply,while the private counterpart turns out to be the opposite.In 1990,the city's houses were chiefly state-owned,with a percentage of 75,but it went down to 20% in 2000.By contrast,the quantity of private houses soared from 25% in 1990 to 80% in 2000. It is no difficult for us to put forward some factors responsible for these changes.At the top of the list,the new policy of the government has been instituted which supported the private ownership of houses.In addition,it is with the development of the economy that more and more citizens have adequate financial resources to afford a house.In the light of a recent Internet survey,approximately 80% of the employees with high salary intend to buy their own houses in the near future.Finally, the real state enterprises who exploited the huge potential of the market have built a multitude of apartments in supply. In the eyes of above-mentioned,folks can know that the current situation is positive and should be advocated.At the same time,civilians are coming under pressure to make more money so the they can buy their own houses.
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