十一期间(National Holiday),你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待,并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学,主要包括如下内容:
1.感谢同学的热情邀请;
2.对他及家人的热情款待表示感激;
3.表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象;
4.再次感谢他们一家人,并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式,而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出,内容并不复杂,可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
结构较为严谨,文中衔接成分很少;文中从句的使用的有点少了;文中拼写错误稍多,词汇表达贫乏。
Dear Xiao lu and your family: First i am very preasure you invite me to your hometown, and thanks for you and your family take over, i was very happy on National Holiday with your family. you take me visisted some very beauterful famouse places, now i always appreace on my brace. Thanks for your familys, i invite you and your family come to my hometawn. your friend