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TV---A Good Thing TV, as a necessary part in our daily life, has both advantages and disadvantages. What we need to do is to take advantage of its benefits and prevent ourselves from being disturbed by its disadvantages.So in my opinion, TV is a good thing with its inevitable limitation. Here are my detailed reasons. Firstly,television is an important tool for spreading culture and information. It is a source of education as well as entertainment. For example,you can sit at home and you'll know national and world affairs.Secondly,watching TV proply is good for children to increase their knowledge.Thirdly, education experts think it is beneficial to improve the memory effect on the development children's perceived ability .Television features' motion and sound, while stimulating the senses to attract children's attention.At the same time it is easy to perceive, remember and improve the child's interest,such as the dynamic characteristics of TV can make them memorize well. To conclude, TV's advantages overweigh its disadvantages.