增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;文章用词太过单一,注意少数拼写错误。
I have a good friend. Her name is Lily. She is a beatiful girl.We know each other at primary school. When I first saw her, I feel she is nice and we will be good friend. Until now,I know my feeling is right. We not only living nearly,and also having same hobbies, same values and same feelngs. I hope we will be friend forever.