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I have a good friend. Her name is Lily. She is a beautiful girl.We know each other at primary school. When I first saw her, I feel she is nice and we will be good friend. Until now,I know my feeling is right. We not only living nearly,and also having same hobbies, same values and same feelngs. I hope we will be friend forever.