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Human ,one of the most complicate word in my dictionery.Plants and animal include forest ,disert every kinds of evironment should be protect by us no matter how late we realized. First industial revolution that we create railroad and cars ,they are a new era to us to open horizen field for transportion.But on the other side ,cause evironment changed a lot animal`s life turn into dangerous. Second industial revolution get a lot in communication, biological field, then people`s life get more convinent. When we try our first boom, we ignore our surrounding has been changing. Take your attiention get more and more hard. I still believe that people got gold heard and kind mind and responsibility to protect and refine our home ,our world for next generation.The beautiful things won`t dead because hope can let us know what we should do and what we had done .
