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A BETIFUL CITY IN CHINA if a foreign friend of mine is going to my hometown,I am very glad to introdious a beautiful city to you ,Qinhuangdao,it is really a beautiful city to visit. for one thing ,it is a good place to come to in summer,for there are blu sky and sea ,you can swim in the sea ,and take various seashell,the sea can enable you to foriget the pressure in your life .for another ,qinhuangdao is also famous for its name , the ampero qin dynisty ,he is not only bring us progress of culture,but slso the first ampero in china by all people admired. in addition,there are great wall ,and shanhai guan ,they are both famou in china history and more and more foreign friend love this city because of its mistrious . in my opinion,i think it is a good choice for you to come to my city ,only when you come here ,will you really feel the emission of the people and fall in love with it.
