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The impact of the internet on interpersonal Cmmunication nowdays,there is a hot debate on the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication,as for such a question , the ideas vary from person to person. some people are inclined to use the internet to communicate with others,such as skype or qq ,for one thing , it is so convenient to communicate with others that we can chat whatever time,internet bring us more convenient life,and it can be a vitual, ,for another,we can make new friends by internet ,it can while others argue that internet decrese the communication face to face, so if we spend time on communicating with others face to face,the emotion will be better. for my part,I think it is reasonble for us to communicate by interet,
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