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All of students listen to me.In this moden centery,English is power weapon in our life.If we are good at English ,we will travel all over the world.The more we learn,the more we can get.Not only is the English important but also can good good for us to find a good job.There are some tips on improving English .First,we can practice English eveyday.Second,we can bulid an English group ,which include those who are not good at English,which attended teachers who from America,which offers a sum of English written paper.In a conclusion,we should finish our homework by ourselves.Therefore,we must believe we learn English better,even do the best!
