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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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作者高级词汇量积累不足,部分单词有拼写错误;文章上下文衔接自然;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮。

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Certainly,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. After a long brainstorming seesion,i draw a conclusion that everthing looks like this. Taking a look around ,we can find examples at ease:i have a obligation advised to lower hopes,if you falling love with someone. The secret of a long and happy relationship appears to be not to expect too much form it. So to aim low to ensure you are not disappointed.In contrast, i think that holding a more prosaic view of your loved one means you are less likely to be disappionted.and therfore more satisfied with your relationship. If you wouldn't able to live without your affection. you are stupid. Because there are mang things makes life easier. The reason for me is that i look forward to konwing,learning and finding out more about everything. Right form studies to games,the eagerness to do better.

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