作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。
Tom is my best friend, who grew up with me. He is so kind and handsome. He has big eyes and a big nose, what's more, he is 180 cm.He likes to read books both like gaming. He is extremely curious and clever. When I am in trouble, he always comes to me at first. I hope we can be friends forever.