作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;正确句子的比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章上下文衔接自然。
Tom is my best friend, who grew up with me. He is so kind and handsome. He has big eyes and a big nose, what's more, he is 180 cm.He likes to read books both like gaming. He is extremely curious and clever. When I am in trouble, he always helps me to leave the trouble. I hope we can be friends forever.