小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I has a good friend, he is a honours man,he and my relationship is very good.he has a short hairs and an blacks eyes .he and i is classmate in university.he like playing basketball,playing chess,and reading book. he fond helping other people .he is genourous very much .we also like it.