正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;文中衔接词丰富。
Tom is my best friend, who grew up with me. He is so kind and handsome. He has two big eyes and a big nose, at the same time, he is 180 centimeter. He likes to read books both like gaming. He is extremely curious and clever. When I am in trouble, he always does me a favor. I hope we can be friends forever.