作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Tom is my best friend, who grew up with me. He is so kind and handsome. He has two big eyes and a big nose, at the same time, he has 180 centimeters. He both likes to reading books and gaming. He is extremely curious and clever. When I am in trouble, he always does me a favor. I hope we can be friends forever.