小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Tom is my best friend, who grew up with me. He is so kind and handsome. He has two big eyes and a big nose, at the same time, he has 180 centimeters. He both likes to read books and gaming. He is extremely curious and clever. When I am in trouble, he always does me a favor. I hope we can be friends forever.