作者词汇基本功很好,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;过渡词和衔接词不饱和,文章行文较为流畅;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用。
Certainly,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. After a long brainstorming session.I draw a conclusion that everything looks like this. Taking a look around ,we can find examples at ease:i have obligation to advised you keep lower hopes,provied that you falling love with someone. The secret of a long and happy relationship appears to be not to expect too much form it.As a result aim low to ensure you are not disappointed.In contrast, I think that holding a more prosaic view of your loved one mean that you are less likely to be disappiontment.And therefore more satisfied with your relationship. Miserably you wouldn't able to live without your affection. You are stupid. Because there are many things makes life easy. The reason for me is that i look forward to konwing,learning and finding out more about everything. Right form studies to games,the eagerness to do better.