2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

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everyone has a name that was given others to recognize. it is a symbol for a person.having a good name, it is convinence for others to remenber . some people think that the name is not so important for a man. they only think it is a symbol for others ,and what your name is not so importance . but other people refers to that it is very importance. because it is represent for a person ,and it is company a man for the whole life . and it is also a impression for others . as for me , i regard that it is importance the name of the person. however , your name is the symbol of you .