高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

My hometown was very beautiful in the past years. a lot of trees around the town.and the river was clean,you could see many fish in the river. Although the house was simple,and the street was narrow,but people were all very satisfied with the life. Now,A lot of building around. you can see many cars in the street.the industry are all development.But it made the green reduced.you can't see the fishes in the river.I think it is the urgently to improve the environment.