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2015年高考作文优秀范文:平凡工作

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:32浏览次数:1718
要求:
  阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
  To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant ,not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend ,painting the house or digging the garden。
  What is the reason, then? In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the Job they are doing .It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one, such as attaching a door handle to a car. But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say: I have made something !
  Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized, No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs。
  [写作内容]
  1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
  2. 以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法,内容包括:
  (1) 描述清洁工工作的艰辛;
  (2) 假如没有清洁工,环境会变得如何?
  (3) 你对平凡工作者的看法。
  [写作要求]
  1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
  2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

文章组织结构良好;可适当增加几条从句;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Not every one can become a great man whose the people remenber for ever. Most of us have an ordinary job which impacts a little for our society. But every one is a part of our modern society which is necessary for the society to develop. Workers of cleaning streets are a group of people who do an ordinary job,Every morning they must get up early to clean every streets carefully. The work condition is worse, the wage is lower. Even more they have to endure " dull and boring"job. But if there aren't a great many of the cleaning workers in our cities.I can't imgine what our cities look like. They contribute themselves to keep the city clean,Everyone who live in the city should respect and thank them for their hard woking. Frankly speaking, Every one in the mordern society is an ordinary person. Every one has a different role to do a different job according to the requirement of the society.although everyone makes different acheievement during their jobs.As we know, Anyone who make a great contribution for our society start their careers form the ordinary job .

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