文章组织结构良好;可适当增加几条从句;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。
Not every one can become a great man whose the people remenber for ever. Most of us have an ordinary job which impacts a little for our society. But every one is a part of our modern society which is necessary for the society to develop. Workers of cleaning streets are a group of people who do an ordinary job,Every morning they must get up early to clean every streets carefully. The work condition is worse, the wage is lower. Even more they have to endure " dull and boring"job. But if there aren't a great many of the cleaning workers in our cities.I can't imgine what our cities look like. They contribute themselves to keep the city clean,Everyone who live in the city should respect and thank them for their hard woking. Frankly speaking, Every one in the mordern society is an ordinary person. Every one has a different role to do a different job according to the requirement of the society.although everyone makes different acheievement during their jobs.As we know, Anyone who make a great contribution for our society start their careers form the ordinary job .