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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10545
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

文中从句数量过少;作者词汇基础扎实;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

This lesson is about the dialogue. At the beginning I present the new words with some pictures and guides Ss' thinking ability by questions. It makes Ss to think and active classroom atmosphere. At the same time, the Ss can review the knowledge. Then I talk with Ss and make them do pair work. I also design an interview to practice their ability of speaking. I used many ways to do the practice. It got a good interaction between T and Ss, Ss and Ss. This class is basical on schedule, complete the teaching task and the teaching effect is also good, but there are also insufficient places. In this class, there is some slip of the tongue. In the future, I must pay attention to the colloquial language and think clearly about what to say in each sentence.

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