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2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(29)写作:The Changes of My Friend

发布时间:2013-09-12 17:50浏览次数:2533[网页划词已开启]
要求:
假设你是无锡日报English Weekly的小编辑,请以“The Changes of My Friend” 为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。Sam是你的朋友,他是中学生。内容提示见下表:
过去
1.喜欢各种各样的电视节目如:卡通片、运动等
2.所有空闲时间都在看电视,所以不擅长所有学科,还经常生病。
3.后来遇到了一个好老师——约翰。鼓励他要努力学习并帮助他复习功课;建议他要多花时间在学习上并多做锻炼。
现在
已改变了很多,……

注意:

1、短文须包括表格内所有信息,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;

2、省略号处请用自己1-2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;

3、词数80个左右,短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。


The Changes of My Friend
My friend is Sam. He is a middle school student. In the past, 
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。

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The Change of My Friend My friend is Sam. He is a middle school student. In the past, he liked different kinds of TV shows, such as, the cartoons show, sports show. In his all spare time, he watched TV. so he was not good at all his subjets, and then he offen got sick. After all, he met a good teacher named Joan. The teacher encouraged him that he must be study hardly, and he help Sam to restudy the lessons. He also suggested that Sam must spare more time in his studies and had do more exercises. Now, My friend Sam has changed. He likes to talk with parents and teachers and makes friends with others .At the same time, his study is very good and he owns a good health .

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