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The Change of My Friend My friend is Sam. He is a middle school student. In the past, he liked different kinds of TV shows, such as, the cartoons show, sports show. In his all spare time, he watched TV. so he was not good at all his subjets, and then he offen got sick. After all, he met a good teacher named Joan. The teacher encouraged him that he must be study hardly, and he help Sam to restudy the lessons. He also suggested that Sam must spare more time in his studies and had do more exercises. Now, My friend Sam has changed. He likes to talk with parents and teachers and makes friends with others .At the same time, his study is very good and he owns a good health .