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作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力；句法方面做得很棒，但是从句不多；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
In China,there's a saying that "t he landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this,I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China. Overlooked the Li Jiang River,Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi. The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location. The trees line the streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September,filled the air with sweet scent. Guilin is a place where it is full of breath-taking scenery. From the ancient times,Guilin has been noted for its elegant landscape. It features beautiful mountains,clean rivers,grotesque rocks and mysterious crags,which is a feast to the eyes. Sitting on a bamboo raft drifting down the river,visitors can see varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water. They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting. I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.
