【题目要求】
Some people think news is in no connection with people's lives, therefore, it is a complete waste of time to read the news in the newspaper or watch TV news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
【题目翻译】
有些人认为新闻跟人们的生活关系不大,因此,读报纸或看电视新闻完全是浪费时间。
你在多大程度上同意或不同意这一观点?
【题目关键词】
1-news
2-in no connection with
3-a complete waste of time
4-read the news in the newspaper
5-watch TV news
【写作小贴士】
此类题目是典型的argumentative essay/report,可以遵照双边类文章的写作模式,也可以按单边类方法写作,建议单边写作,现从read news in the newspaper和watch TV news好的角度着手,首先,Reading news in the newspaper or watching TV news give families something to bond over. Both newspaper and television have led to some great conversations. Often, talking about something that occurred in a newspaper or TV show will lead to discussions of real life situations. If this is not a benefit, I do not know what is 。其次,News in the newspaper or TV news are both educational and in formative. News can be as educational as going to school。最后,We can learn about different people and places. Newspaper or TV news opens up the world, whether through watching TV news or newspaper news with multicultural characters!
【写作语汇一览表】
1-inculcate a great habit like reading in someone
2-become a passion for someone
3-one’s perseverance of this trend
4-the mounting pressure of work
5-keep someone engrossed
6-introduce someone to the different cultures around the globe
7-give you a glimpse into other cultures and places of the world
8-reduce boredom
9-break the monotony of a lazy, uncreative and boring life
10-explore a new world filled with information and ingenuity
11-make your vision blurry
12-for a wide variety of reasons
语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文章能较恰当地使用高级词汇,但单词拼写检查要认真。
people's success need some element factors such as ambitions to invigorate them catch their life goals, with such emthusam, people worked hard and finally come out on top. In modern society, being ambitious could be even more precious. competiveness can not to be avoid, there are always someone who gets gorcious skills or qualities, if people would like to leve out of an mandain, then to some exten, ambition serves as a leding beacon which always pointing the way. or we can say ambitious people seem more self-confident, and most of them are llikely to work out for their prepisous future compared with their conterparters ,with this good quality they can success double than ordinary colleagues. Even though, being ambitious seems necessary quality for morden people, still there are lots of debates about ambition, in some stereotypes, ambtion is another way of saying greed. When we talk about ambition, the first thing pops up in people's mind might be rude or uncivilized, full of aggression. in traventional views ,people show be present polite and gentleness, but in my view, it's totally out of data. ever since we stepped into industrial society, the whole human life was changed, the old thinks couldn't stand the water. for exemple, in a company there are few possitions, that's obviouslly means the competiveness is serivious, if your lack ambition and always think just do the thing commonly, then the resulte must be that you would eventually fall behand from others, and even be dissmissed by the company. so my point is always keeping ambitious. In conclusion , in this fast paced society, only if always being ambiytious could make you keep follow the trends and have oppoinety to fulfuil your dream.