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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13046
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。

用户练习作文:

We had to take a long trip to visit our friend in five hundred years ago. We had communicated with others by writing letters. With technology developing, we can keep connect with other at any time and any where. Present or nowadays, it is no doubt that the significant of communication is more and more important. Human is a kind of social animals.we feel lonely after lost a chance to empress ourselves to other people at we have a special mention. People are glad to share event, like a secret, they met or heart with their ordinary friend. Otherwise, the animal which like a tiger can take care itself very well.Because human have not such big power as tigers, human can not protect themselves in remote date. We can build a bridge of believe between each other by once by once communication. As everyone knows, the belief is one of important component of succeed. Thus, everyone need communicate with each other.

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