2015年高考作文优秀范文：About Examinations

从句使用很不错，再接再厉；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；适当增加高级词汇的使用，拼写错误稍微有点多。

About Examinations I have taken the exams many times since i went to school, when it comes to the question whether should we take so many examinations or not,the views vary from person to person,somepeople holds that examination is a magic weapon of thachers,but others deem that we should reform the entrance system,in my opinion,i prefer to the latter. for one thing, srudents will spend much time on preparing the exam,thus they have no time to enjoy themselves,for nother,the grade can not prove the abilitys of students,it is just a symble,in addition,students would lose heart if they lose in the exam,so it is advisable for us to reform the entrance system. in my part,only when we reform the entrance system,can our students be more confident and happy.