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A good student leader can have various qualities such as honest, self-confident, and friendly. Be honest and self-confident are helpful for another people to trust. Friendly is helping to build friendship between the student leader and the other students. On the other hands, a good student leader needs excellent planning skills and great communication skills. Everything needs a plan, planning for steps by steps and managing for time. A good student leader needs to plan a meet or a party, what kinds background, where to meet, and when it starting. He or she needs to control the time line for the meet and party. That made people more enjoy the party and had more fun with the meet. In addition, he or she needs to plan the time for himself or herself to improve themselves. If a student leader good at communication, he or she works easier that another. Communication between student leader and students, school, and teacher are significant to show the student leader is good or not. A good student leader can talk with students deeply; they have known each other, understood each other, and how to help each other. He or she knows what is the student good at and how to improve the student’s shortcoming. A good student leader is helping student more solidarity and enhancing their ability of life. He is more likes an older brother to help student in the school. He is using his experience and his knowledge to rise another student.