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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
评语:

错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

I fee overwhelmingly surprise when i see the title at the first time.Even today,the judge a person by appearance is common phenomenon here and there.I have a story about to tell you. One day,a person pouring his core beliefts to manufacture a picture,and he took his picture to participate in International exhibition competition.Unfortunately,the doorkeeper turned him down because of his poor clothing., Meanwhile,a celebrated artist saw the scene occasinally. And the artist affirm that the picture is a masterpiece.The poor man made a huge accomplishment ulimately. And this is what's erroneous with the world today.The well off guy thinks that he can roll right over the poor guy untill the poor guy says enough.Anyone have no right to claim you are needy you can't.It's all about i want to tell you.

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