文中词汇表达较为丰富,但高级词汇比较少,单词拼写要也加强;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
From:Wang Haiyang wanghaiyang@hotmail.com DATE:2008 on12 23 To:sales-department@hotmail.com We already recived 3000 product on December 22 from your company, but according to our signing of the NO.35 order,the correct product's amount is 3500, the rest of 500 we have not recive not yet. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply!