2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

作者应增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达灵活多样，但单词拼写方面要继续努力；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

the Mid-Autumn Festival It is a Chinese tradional festival in lunar calendar August ,fifteenth every year.many people will go home from different derections so that they can together with thier families. the family memmbers are going to prepare some dilicious foods earlily for themselves.and after they have dinner,they will enjoy the full moon ,and then enjoy thier moon cake with the family arounding a round table happily. According Chinese holiday arrange, during this festival, people in this country have a three-day holiday. so plenty of persons plan to go travaling with thier families. in this way, people can relax themselves , and can wokr hard after vacation. besides ,people also can visit thier frends and relations in these days, and can give some gifts to thier parents ,and taik with them . I wonder this festival is so goood, we should be proud of our country.