作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;语言不流畅。
good friend I have a good friend.I call her yaya. She's very lovely. She like study more cass. So, she made good fist at her work. We always made date at a mall.We test many delicious and shopped shoes. We talked about dream or job,and share happiness.She is my friend and my teacher. She teach me optimistic and insist.It has benefited me a lot.I am glad to have such a so good friend.