托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第23篇:想一辈子就在一家公司工作是不现实的

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持，也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。

some pepole say that it is unrealistic for people to expecet to work for the same company or employer for all of their lives,i think that is not my point. i think everyone in the society can choose to work for diversity of jobs and feel the different colourful lives. when i was 22 years old,i got graduated,and i found my first job as a landscape designer in my career afer a moth when i left my college. i still remenbered that i came to the company first day,i was very nervous,and as if my heart would jump out my mouth,i worked so hard for the company 2 years ,and then i left there and found a new job as another position in another company. after a few years ,i changed about 5 or 6 jobs,every time when i wanted to quite my job,i thought maybe i would have a new change for myself,and in company where i worked for,i always thought as if i could spent my whole life to work for the company ,sometimes people thought that was the loyalty and mature,and if you often changed your job,you will be thought a un-kind man. in my opion,we should try our best to have the experience working for different company ,and have diversity of working,then you may feel another life ,you will have different views in yourself,of course ,you could work for your company or employees for your whole life,i just wanted to say,do not force yourself and follow your heart. on the other one hand,different working experience could help us to build a new balance about life and job,you would not have to work all day or feel down for yourself ,the changement of the job can make you fresh in life.