字数:200满分:100分
作者在句法层面做的很棒;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
As we can see in the comic picture above, two handicapped men who respectively has lost a single thigh are running side by side and bend their arms around the other's shoulder. From their gaze to each other, and the thumb turned up, we can infer that they are experiencing sense of accomplishment and confident in their future. How swift their steps are! After leaving behind the canes, they seem to have renewed lives. Additionally, there is an annotation saying that two legs separately from you and me, enable us travel across the world together. It goes without saying that this drawing want to lay stress on cooperation. Besides, it reveals the deep reason why cooperation is good for us. The first thing is that no one is perfect, which means everyone has shortcomings, and of course has particular strengths. And this fact constitutes the needs for finding a partner.