单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
My friend is tall and kind. He and me are classmates. He is good at playing football. Besides, he is very funny. He like make jokes. We have a good time during high school. A truly friend will open his mind and that is just what he were. So, that's all.