3、词数80左右(首句已给出,不计算在总词数之内)。
拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest. Some make noises in public places. Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on. As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors. For example, throw rubbish into dustbins and don’t write or draw on the relics. Don’t make noises in public places. We’d better follow guides and obey orders. At the same time, we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions.