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Today, i want talk about my opion on what we can do to make our lfe more meaningful. I am a student come from a medical college. Obviously, i'm a future doctor. There are many meaningful things we can do. With the passage of time,studying turn out to be the most important thing that ever accept by me. When i was little, i hold the view that studying was a very small part of life.And now,just like the old words ''theoretical guidance practice ''saying.We must have well-knit professional basic knowledge when we're facing fresh life. And keeping healthy also is a significant things.Your fanmilys will have less anxiousty about you whenever you own a healthy body. You also can realize self-value that maybe help you be true to who you are. At the end, i think we should keep up with our owen heart,do what you want.
