作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文章上下文衔接自然。
Today, I want talk about my standpoint on what we can do to make our life more meaningful. I'm a student come from a medical college. Obviously, I'm a future doctor. There are many meaningful things we can do. With the passage of time,studying turn out to be the most important thing that ever accepted by me. When i was little, I hold the view that studying was a very small part of life.And now,just like the old words saying ''theoretical guidance practice ''. We must have well-knit professional basic knowledge when we're facing fresh life. And keeping healthy is also a important things. Your familys will have less anxiety about you whenever you own a healthy body. You can also realize self-value that maybe help you be true to who you are. In the end, I think we should keep up with our own heart,do what you want.