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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9026
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文章衔接手法恰当;作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

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Today, I want talk about my standpoint on what we can do to make our life more meaningful. I'm a student who comes from a medical college. Obviously, I'm a future doctor. There are many meaningful things we can do. With the passage of time, studying turn out to be the most important thing that ever accepted by me. When I was little, I hold the view that studying was a very small part of life.And now,just like the old words saying ''theoretical guidance practice ''. We must have well-knit professional basic knowledge when we're facing fresh life. And keeping healthy is also the most important things that you should do it last long time. Your family members will have less anxiety about you whenever you own a healthy body. You can also realize self-value that maybe help you be true to who you are. In the end, I think we should keep up with our own heart, do what you want.

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