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Today, I want talk about my standpoint on what we can do to make our life more meaningful. I'm a student who comes from a medical college. Obviously, I'm a future doctor. There are many meaningful things we can do. With the passage of time, studying turn out to be the most important thing that ever accepted by me. When I was little, I hold the view that studying was a very small part of life.And now,just like the old words saying ''theoretical guidance practice ''. We must have well-knit professional basic knowledge when we're facing fresh life. And keeping healthy is also the most important things that you should do it last long time. Your family members will have less anxiety about you whenever you own a healthy body. You can also realize self-value that maybe help you be true to who you are. In the end, I think we should keep up with our own heart, do what you want.