文中从句数量不足;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇词汇使用准确,但要避免拼写出错。
Today,we all in a rapit evolution society with international network. We are facing all kinds of news everyday, insirational、negative、funny、apocryphal from traditional newspaper、TV、radio or present cellphone、computer ......etc. Significatilly it's especially improtant that how to distinguish the truth and false and get the useful massenges we need from overwhelming news. Therefore, we shouldn't get the conclution or make the comments at once we see or listen the news before recognization.
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