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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。

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As far as I am concered, it is unwise to make a conclusion right after seeing or hearing something immediately.Sometimes, thigns are not as same as what it seems like. For example,your parents are strict with your study,sometimes they even beat you when you didn't get a good grade.At that time ,you will feel very unhappy and you think your parents only focus on your grade,in fact ,they only want you to study well and then find a good job in the future,in that case,you can have a good life without thinking about making money evertday.But now,we can't understand them, so we can't make a statement like'my parents don't like me'. It is invisible to make a decision too quickly for that most of things you can't understand it truly.So,we should think twice before we judge one thing.

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