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As far as I am concered, it is unwise to make a conclusion right after seeing or hearing something immediately.Sometimes, thigns are not as same as what it seems like. For example,your parents are strict with your study,sometimes they even beat you when you didn't get a good grade.At that time ,you will feel very unhappy and you think your parents only focus on your grade,in fact ,they only want you to study well and then find a good job in the future,in that case,you can have a good life without thinking about making money evertday.But now,we can't understand them, so we can't make a statement like'my parents don't like me'. It is invisible to make a decision too quickly for that most of things you can't understand it truly.So,we should think twice before we judge one thing.
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