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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文章能较恰当地使用高级词汇，但单词拼写检查要认真；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
Now days people are facing serious pressure, in this fast and competive society, more and more poeple realized that it's very crucial to get hold of good education level. therefor, parents educationists and scientist took lots of energy trying to find a best way to increase the students grades. since that some people proposed to divide students and seperate them into single sex schoools. In my country, most of the schools are established by nation and large apart of them are co-ed schools. but still ,recent years, with the economice development, in some megcities, serval single sex school also appeared. they are mainlly cater for upper classes which was well estalibashed with super-advenced equitments and first tire tutors . students who study there obviously could get the best edcaution resources, and also in this kind of singgle sex schools , children have less chance to get into love affaire which is considered the big hinder in their study life. they can concentrate on their grades. In this way ,it's definetelly a delight thing, but also you have to pay a good deal on those kind of schools. On the other hand, most ordinary masses can not affort such expensive edcation fees. and also in mixed sex schools, puppy love could be the first issue which annoy the parents. but still ,every thing has two sides, think this way, students in a co-ed school, with opposite sex peers which could help them estabish a good and right character, and also while they deal with such realishionship with a huge group, they can learn more than expected. All in all, in my perspective, I think think two kinds of schools system both have their advancement and also disavancemts, I can not directally say which is better, therefor when facing to chose one ,that's definatelly your choice(considering your economic situation and circumstances)
