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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者高级词汇量积累不足，部分单词有拼写错误。
Although we are taught helping people when they are in adversity is honorable, I still don't in favor of we could say yes for everything, maybe it's beyond my competence or I don't like to do this. when I riding a subway, there are many strangers they will ask you for money. But I don't believe they are real beggers, I heard it from newspapers and website that the majority of them are belong to a beggers group, begging is a business just like us working everyday. I think they are taking advantage of me. I don't give them money even if 1 yuan. But actually, I guess not everyone dare to say no when they should do. In household life, facing severe domestice violance from her lover everyday but wifes don't dare they no. why? because they think too much of bad consequences after they no. If their mind is full of negetive information they won't do anything. it's harm to keep silence when you should reject. firstly, you will be controled and they will live in a miserabel situation
可可英语 - 划词释义
