作者词汇基本功很好,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用可适当增加几条从句;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Although we are taught helping person when they are in adversity is honorable, I still don't agree we could say “yes” for each signal of asking help. We should reject some because it's beyond our competence or because we should protect ourselves. when riding a subway, I always meeting strangers who asking me for money. But I don't believe they are real beggars, I heard it from newspapers and website that the majority of them are belong to a beggars group which regard begging as a business and make a lot of money. I hold the view that they are taking advantage of me. I don't give them money even if 1 yuan. I disgust this kind of people. But in reality not everyone dare to say no when they should do. Why this kinds of things happen? because they are full of frightening and can’t to anything. For example, In household life, wife suffered a severe domestic violence. She can do a lot of things to protect herself, like calling police office, breaking out with her husband or leaving, but she do nothing but bearing. I’m so sorry to hear about this. If we don’t say no and still keep silence to our situation, we will be in trouble. you will be controlled by other people. Remember, you are the center of the world. If you controlled by others, you will lost yourself.